Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
the line chart indicates two genders in term of the proportions of smokers during the period of 40-year commencing from 1960 to 2000. Overall, it is clearly visible that the quantity of male and female was always overtaking than that of women at the same time
in details, the rate of men who smoked in Someland witnessed a wild decline over the 10-year. at the start of this period, the percentages of male smokers peaked at 600. a steady fall of 390 was experienced in the levels of men who smoked until 1990 , which was followed by a sharp drop to 240 in 2000
On the contrary, there was a reverse trend in the figures for female smokers. The period between 1960 and 1975 witnessed a remarkable leap in the ranks of women smokers, but later levelled off nearly 300 from 1970 to 1990 . in the next 10 years of the period between 1990 and 2000, the rates of women smokers in Someland continued declining finished at 200
Comments
Hair transplant methods are…
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nessed a wild decline over the 10-year. at the start of this period, the percentag...
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...centages of male smokers peaked at 600. a steady fall of 390 was experienced in t...
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... the levels of men who smoked until 1990 , which was followed by a sharp drop to 2...
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...evelled off nearly 300 from 1970 to 1990 . in the next 10 years of the period betw...
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...lled off nearly 300 from 1970 to 1990 . in the next 10 years of the period between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48214285714 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39238266372 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5403875641 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.051222932404 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294919905471 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326275389299 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0347420158086 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117666789291 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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