You have seen an advertisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing.
Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing you interest.
In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
Ask what work you would be expected to do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the weekend job at your hotel, as advertised in ‘Times of London’ on 30th November. I am a 21 years old student studying in the last year of Hotel Management at Lincoln College in the town and, therefore, a weekend job is ideal for me.
I find myself competent enough for this job as I have studied the technicalities of Hotel Management and I also have hands on experience from my previous jobs at hotels. I am a courteous, dedicated and a sociable person, and have worked around-the-clock to provide superior services to the hotel guests. I was also involved in other hotel management tasks like material procurement and handling petty cash.
What tasks are involved in this job? Is there something similar for me or perhaps I need training? I am willing to attend training, if required. I do hope you will be interested in my application.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Rosalin Sharma
I am writing to apply for weekend job at your hotel
I am writing to apply for the weekend job at your hotel
I am 21 years old student
I am a 21 years old student
in last year of Hotel Management
in the last year of Hotel Management
Sentence: I am a courteous, dedicated and a socialable person, and have worked around-the-clock to provide superior customer services.
Error: socialable Suggestion: sociable
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 160 200
No. of Characters: 781 1000
No. of Different Words: 110 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.649 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.93 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.807 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.757 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4