You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost You have still heard nothing from the airline company Write to the airline and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it Find out what they are going to do about i

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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to know information about my stolen suitcase. My name is Jahangir, and I was the passenger of the Soudia Airline Company. Last week, after my holiday was finished in Singapore, I travelled by plane, which was the Soudia Airline Company, in order to return my home country in London city. Unfortunately, when I reached the London Airport, my suitcase was stolen.

The suitcase was made by leather, and it was black in color. Moreover, there was a scratch, which was in the left side, in the suitcase. Some important documents, a fountain pen, a diary, and some clothes were in the suitcase especially the documents are essential for me because it is significant in terms of my business purpose.

Although this event happened seven days ago, I could not get any respond from your company. I am really dissatisfied with your service, and any information about the suitcase is needed to me. Furthermore, I want to know what steps you take after the suitcase was stolen.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Jahangir

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