The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

The bar gives information about the proportion of male and female in various age groups who did regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.
According to the bar chart, young men prefer to do exercise than young women. In the 15 to 24 age group, 52.8% of young men chose to do regular physical activity, while 47.7% of young women did it. And this is the only age group that men did more exercise than women.
In the 25 to 34 age group, the percentage of women doing a physical activity over men by 48.9% and 42.2% respectively. In the 35 to 44 age group, the gap between gender reached the summit with 13%. Since then, the gap decreased gradually. Women aged 45 to 54 enjoyed doing physical activity most among all these age groups with 53.3% while 43.1% of men joined the activity. In the next ten years, the gap decreased to 7.9%. For the elderly aged 65 and over, a similar percentage of men and women enjoyed exercise.
Overall, the percentage of women doing regular physical activity was larger than men.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5737704918 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35112425085 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0794468327 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0909090909 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47500903778 0.215688989381 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186803246832 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11350762017 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307525357608 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326284547206 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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