The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart illustrates how many percent of Australian men and women did physical activity regularly in 2010.
Overall, Australian females often do more exercises than males in most of the age groups apart from the 15 to 24 group. It is also clear that the most significant disparity between the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity was seen in the figure of the 35 to 44 group.
About 53,3% of Australian women, who were 45 to 54 years old, did physical activities regularly, compared to 53% and 47,1% in the figures of 55 to 64-year-old women and 65 and over-year-old females respectively. Conversely, the percentage of Australian 65 and over-year-old males and 55 to 64-year-old males was higher than that of the 45 to 54-year-old males, with respective figures being 46,7%, 45,1%, and 43,1%.
The percentage of women doing regular physical activities in the 35 to 44 age group was 52,5%, followed by women in the 25 to 34 and 15 to 24 age groups at 48,9% and 47,7% in that order. Australian males doing physical activities most regularly in the 15 to 24 age group, while the figures for the 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 age groups were lower at 42,2% and 39,5% respectively.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72169811321 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85979405488 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457547169811 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8565891431 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393998585616 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227487253739 0.103423049105 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133459846226 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28970475154 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134038823482 0.0819641961636 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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