The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given bar chart provides comparative data about ten countries which generate and consume the most electricity in the year 2014.

Overall, it is evident that China and the USA surpassed all other countries in both production and usage of electricity while the Republic of Korea ranked last in the chart. Notably, Germany is the only country to consume more than its ability to produce.

As can be seen from the illustration, the figure for China’s electricity generation registered a hefty 5,398 billion kWh, which is roughly 1,000 billion above the USA and more than five times that of Russia. The same is true for their consumption numbers with Russia closely equal its production and consumption. Meanwhile, Japan and India ranked fourth and fifth respectively. Canada finished sixth generating more than 600 billion kWh while using only 500 billion kWh.

Looking at the chart in more details, Germany’s consumption figure exceeded their producing capacity of nearly 60 billion kWh. Despite generating and consuming ten times less than China, Korea, Rep still managed to get a place in the top ten countries.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26519337017 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75404251243 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2383779527 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151571965798 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723887104544 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052149488849 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108127737485 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418700409085 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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