The provided bar chart enumerates the information about the consumption and generation of electricity in different top ten countries in the year 2014. Here, units are measured in billion kwh.
Initially,as the graph suggests,China experienced the highest production and consumption of electricity with 5398 billion kwh and 5322 billion kwh in the year 2014 which was almost same. While, Korea had the lowest with 485.1 and 449.5 billion kwh.
However, other countries followed downward trend as compared to China. United States was accounted 4099 billion kwh and
3866 billion kwh for producing and using electricity in 2014. Likewise, Russia and Japan had around similar billions kwh of electricity generation whereas India produced more electricity than it spent out by 871 billion kwh and 698.8 billion kwh.
On the other hand,Germany followed some fluctuation among other countries as it had 582.5 billion kwh of electricity consumption and 526.6 billion kwh of production. It can be seen that Germany was the only country which consumed more than its production. Furthermore,Canada,France and Brazil were almost in the same ranked for spending electricity.
To sum up,maximum electricity was generated and consumed by China and United States while lowest by Korea and Germany.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5303030303 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17899907179 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9371144537 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125556846845 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604752175677 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783621978467 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822446384842 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741852913229 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.