the chart bellow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

the chart bellow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

This bar chart shows the information about the families who owned and rented residences in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall, households in owned accommodation indicated a surge while household in rented accommodation showed a downward trajectory throughout the given time-period.

In 1918, households in rented accommodation marked its highest percentage which is around 78 percent. By 1939 it has decreased approximately by 12 percent and remain constant in 1953. From 1953 rented accommodation showed steep decreased up to 2001.

Households in owned increased rapidly from around 23 percent to almost 70 percent in 2001 then decreased to around 65 percent in 2011. In 1971 both accommodation types reported an equal percentage, which is 50 in percentage. By 1981 households in owned accommodation outraced households in rented by 20 percent. At the end of the time period households in owned accommodation surpassed the rented accommodation by a huge margin.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion showed steep decreased up to 2001. Households in owned increased rapidly fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50993377483 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29259641861 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0342496773 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445354377183 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191510649612 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119877542365 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284638304878 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626167403652 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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