The chart below gives information about the most expensive cities for average hotel stay in 2013

Essay topics:

The chart below gives information about the most expensive cities for average hotel stay in 2013.

The bar chart compares the average daily hotel stay rates of world's six most expensive cities in 2013 measured in US dollars.

Overall, the average cost of hotel stays in Monte Carlo was by far the highest while in Moscow the rate was the lowest.

In 2013, Monte Carlo and Muscat were the top two (most) expensive cities in hotel industry whose daily stays cost $338.34 and $327.74 respectively. At the same time, in New York, staying overnight at hotels required $304.87 making it the third leading city in the chart. Meanwhile, daily rate for a hotel room in Key West and Rio de Janeiro cities was over $270.00 on average with the former city being more expensive. However, the remaining city, Moscow, ranked the last position for its average hotel rental price with $257.34 per day.

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Average: 6.2 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69343065693 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10274729023 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656934306569 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 11.186549463 43.030603864 26% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383582303248 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189024738663 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906507432405 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269592449641 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112192467128 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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