The chart below show how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Essay topics:

The chart below show how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The bar chart compares frequency of eating out at fast food restuarants among the USA people over the 10-year period from 2003 to 2013.

Overall, it is clear that the majority number of people in the United State go to fast food restaurants once a week or once or twice a month in the 10 years period. Besides, going to fast food restuarants everyday or never are rare cases.

In the year 2003, around 31% and 30% of population in the USA went to fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month respectively, which were the two most hightest percentages. The frequency of having fast food once a week rose to about 33% and then went down to around 27%, while once or twice a month dropped by 5% in 2006 and then took the highest ratio at 33%.

On the other hand, approximately 17% of people in the USA ate out at fast food restaurants several times a week, following 3 years 5% more people ate out more, about 4% dropped eventually in 2013. Nearly 13% of the US people ate fast food, the ratio grew up to 15% in 2006 and it stayed till 2013. The percentage of eople who never eat out at fast food or eat out everyday were under 5% all the time during the whole period.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...Besides, going to fast food restuarants everyday or never are rare cases. In the year...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...o never eat out at fast food or eat out everyday were under 5% all the time during the w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...% all the time during the whole period.
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27433628319 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31941145813 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.307652972 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309342899611 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155795083196 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806805833424 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204323847833 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661138129283 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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