The chart below shows reason why people travel to work by bicycle or by car

Essay topics:

The chart below shows reason why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The two supplied pie charts compare the different considerations why people commute to working places by bike or by vehicle.

Overall, the two major segments of choosing cycling to work are health and fitness and less pollution, whereas comfort is the most popular reason for driving.

Regarding reasons for cycling to work, health and fitness and less pollution are the 2 major segments, both accounting for three fifths of total reasons. In addition, other three reasons comprise under 20 percent, while no parking problems account for 15 percent. The reason of no cost make up 15 percent, as compared to slightly less by 1 percent in the reason of faster than driving, and it is the least popular reason.

Looking specifically at reason for driving to work, reason of comfort is the major segment, totaling four fifths of total reasons. The next major proportion is distance to work, comprising slightly over two fifths of reasons. In stark contrast, both reason of need to carry things to work and faster than cycling experience slightly under 15 percent, in contrast to slightly less 3 percent in the least reason of safer than cycling.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cycle'.
Suggestion: to cycle
...all, the two major segments of choosing cycling to work are health and fitness and less...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03664921466 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55078620002 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7029719597 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188055462265 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963457924963 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483845987828 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132557592327 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463149583952 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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