The chart below shows the total numer of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories,from 1995-2002
The bar chart illustrates the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.
Over all,It is clear that the local fixed line where the most popular type,the lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls.
In 1995,people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local call,and half of that amount of time for national and international calls.The mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes.over the four years, the figures for all three of phone call increased steadily.
By 1999,the amount of time spent on local calls using had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes.In 2002,the number of international calls passed 60 billion, while the mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76642335766 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4635442008 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6927037936 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.25 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210735510875 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133596709047 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696461034592 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133596709047 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696461034592 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.