the chart illustrates the percentage of boys and girls taking part in various sports in New zealand in the year 2002.
Overall, the proportion of boys who participated in most of the sports was more than that of girls, except in athletics, netball and swimming. While the number of boys playing soccer was highest, most girls played netball.
Among girls, there was 25% playing netball, higher than 22% of girls taking part in swimming. In addition, the figures for tennis, basket, and soccer were relatively similar, between 5% and 8%, which was higher than the number of girls being keen on athletics and marital, at 5% and 3%. The smallest proportion was in marital arts, with only 1%. About 10% of girls played other sports.
In contrast, fewest boys took part in netball, at only 1%. Whereas, the largest number of boys who played soccer accounted for 25%. Besides, there was about 13% of boys participating in swimming, being slightly higher than 10%-11% of boys playing crickets and marital arts. Last, the figures for tennis, basket ball and athletics were lower, standing at 7%, 6%, 5% respectively. However, New Zealand witnessed 18% of boys playing other sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9847715736 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44781658307 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.713109489 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190414539868 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825893437829 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822591065612 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147735453903 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759556709565 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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