The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The bar chart represents the percentage ratios of households in rented and owned accommodation in the country of England and Wales between years 1918 and 2011.

Overall, the household in rented accommodation showed a declining trend, while the households in owned accommodation showed an inclining trend throughout the period. Both the type of accommodations had minor fluctuations. Although households in owned accommodations initially had a lower rate, it outraced household in rented accommodation by the end of the period.

Household in owned accommodation was about 25% against Households in rented accommodation being at almost 75% in 1918. Then the household in owned accommodation increased and was almost 35% and remained stagnant in 1939 and 1953 then it saw a gradual increase up to almost 70% in 2001 and saw a final decline of 5% at 65% at the end of the period in 2011.

Household in rented accommodations was about 75% in 2001 which decreased to almost 65% in 1939 and remained almost stagnant in 1939 and 1953 and then it decreased to almost 50% in 1971 were the ratio of households in both the accommodations were exactly equal and finally household in rented accommodation saw a gradual decline up to 2001 and a final incline of almost 5% from 2001 at 35% in 2011.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0511627907 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16046426066 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395348837209 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.210429405 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.142857143 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462028959121 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269715446587 0.103423049105 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1861766408 0.0843802449381 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348645588298 0.15604864568 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193939276012 0.0819641961636 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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