The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The bar chart represents the percentage ratios of households in rented and owned accommodation in the country of England and Wales between years 1918 and 2011.

Overall, the household in rented accommodation showed a declining trend, while the households in owned accommodation showed an inclining trend throughout the period. Both the type of accommodations had minor fluctuations. Although households in owned accommodations initially had a lower rate, it outraced household in rented accommodation by the end of the period.

Household in owned accommodation was about 25% against Households in rented accommodation being at almost 75% in 1918. Then the household in owned accommodation increased and was almost 35% and remained stagnant in 1939 and 1953 then it saw a gradual increase of about 35% and went up to almost 70% in 2001 and saw a final decline of around 5% and going down to around 65% at the end of the period in 2011.

Household in rented accommodations was about 75% in 2001 which decreased to almost 65% in 1939 and remained almost stagnant in between 1939 and 1953 and then it decreased by 15% and came down to almost 50% in 1971 were the ratio of households in both the accommodations were exactly equal. Finally household in rented accommodation saw a gradual decline up to 2001 which came around 30% and then saw a final incline of almost 5% from 2001 to 2011 at around 35%.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9746835443 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04669984745 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396624472574 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8264659061 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.375 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446382711687 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246548595884 0.103423049105 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183805647128 0.0843802449381 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345896654287 0.15604864568 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19557690105 0.0819641961636 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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