The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984

The bar charts draw a comparison of age distribution between France and India in terms of gender in the year 1984.
Looking at the graph, it is clearly seen that Indian population was younger than that of France in 1984 while the percentage of elderly people was much significantly higher in France than the other.
In terms of inhabitants of both nations according to age, the proportion of Indian people falling into 0-5 age group accounted for the highest contribution, at around 14% which was twice higher than that of France. The figure for French citizens who were between 5 and 40 years old made up the majority vast, at nearly 8% of both genders while the percentage of people in India who aged 5 to 40 experienced downward trends roughly from 13% to 6%. About 13% of French senior citizens were 70 years old and over, compared to only 1% of the figure for India.
Looking at the figure for population distribution by genders, there was a noticeably larger proportion of French elderly women than men at the age 70 and over, at roughly 18% and 12% respectively while a variety of gender differences were in the figures for India.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (10 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68656716418 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62775124527 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1332282109 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219326235868 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126804399674 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841944038666 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16124842161 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857097077866 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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