The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the worldSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 regions over the world.

Overall, water used for agriculture accounts for the largest proportions in all 4 out of 6 areas. In addition, the percentages of water used for domestic purposes stay at relatively low levels at all 6 regions.

88% of water used in Central Asia, which accounts for the largest part, is for agriculture while the figures for Africa, South East Asia and South America are also 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. Meanwhile, the proportions of water used in agricultural sector in North America and Europe are significantly lower, at 39 % and 32 % respectively. In terms of water usage in industrial sector, Europe is the region consuming the largest percentage of water, following by North America with 48%. The 4 remaining regions consume low percentages of water, with 12% in South East Asia, 10% in South America, 7% in Africa and 5% in Central Asia.

Water usage for domestic purpose stays at low proportions in all 6 regions, below 20%. The amount of water is domestically used in South America accounts for 19% compared to 15% in Europe and 13% in North America. Only 9% of water used for domestic purpose in Africa, which is slightly higher than that for South East Asia and Central Asia, at 7% for the two regions.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8384279476 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75782379769 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46288209607 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2960393451 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210993813873 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115554956388 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425761822912 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16826159434 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303300376061 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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