Essay topics:
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the Salmon.
The given diagram enumerates the life cycle of salmon which is species of large fish.
As it is explained in the diagram that how salmon are pop out from eggs and passes from three stages of life and turns to among the species of large fish called salmon.
At first, salmon lays eggs in between small stones below reeds for approximate 5-6 months on the tediously moving river and turns to smolt where it stays lower river for approximate 4 years.
At last, smolt fish turns to salmon after spending 5 years of time in the open sea and again reproduce or lays eggs of other salmons. This process continues till egg turns to smolt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ggs and passes from three stages of life and turns to among the species of large ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly moving river and turns to Smolt where it stays lower river for approximate 4 y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 533.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08575029643 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 153.9 283.868780488 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0817574157 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384025186601 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222021634275 0.103423049105 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208085840776 0.0843802449381 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272475666817 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201927334367 0.0819641961636 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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