The diagram below shows the steps in the hiring process at ACME corporation

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the steps in the hiring process at ACME corporation.

The given diagram illustrates the information about different stages of ACME corporation's recruitment process.

Overall, there are many steps of submit application of candidates and this process ends by either offering a permanent position in the company or denying any position at all.

At a first glance, this process is initial with submit form of nominee's then they attend first qualifying interview. After that, they are divided into two categories - "meet the basic qualifications" and "do not meet basic qualifications". The second category applicants are disqualified while the candidates who meet the qualifications are further tested. In the next step, the qualified applicants take aptitude test, based on which they are either marked as failed or pass.

Probing further, the failed candidates are left out from recruitment process while passed applicants are offered six-month probation who are evaluated after probation period. At the last stage, company does recommended to those who succeed for permanent position in ACME corporation while fail are discarded by company.

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Average: 7.9 (26 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86585365854 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27118931315 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664634146341 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3589690874 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153692335104 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070268683914 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581529144372 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110767842333 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467773459362 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.3012195122 131% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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