The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949 2008 Write a 150 word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008.
Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the renewable energy is consumed in America between 1949 to 2008
There is a stable increment we can see in the total consumption of the renewable energy, more than doubled in the 2008 about 8 quadrillion. However, a slight drop was seen in the 2000, down 2 quadrillion, in contrast to the 1995.
The hydroelectric power in the most vital sources in the USA, therefore it has a similar trend with the total consumption, with a stable rise between de beginning to the 1974, fluctuating about after three decades. Besides, the wood is also important in the renewable energy, showing a fluctuation around 2.
Meanwhile, the wind and biofuels have less significance in the America’s renewable energy, which did not use about the past of forty years. What the noticeably change is that we the 1990s to 2000s saw a markedly grow about 2 quadrillion.
Overall, the hydroelectric power and wood are often use in the USA and renewable energy consumption is consumed increasingly. The other major sources changes in recent 40 years.

Votes
Average: 6.8 (14 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01123595506 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99591524295 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2697672184 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147371679311 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577891825849 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637327310101 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091472830293 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571891689598 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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