The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.

Essay topics: The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.

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The diagrams represent the changes made with a small fishing village turning into a large tourist resort in Europe.
Overall, fishing village had mostly residential and agricultural areas near to the beach in the south of the map, which turned into commercial buildings along the beach lines. It is apparent that, the decks for boats have been removed for beach resorts.
Fishing village had almost nothing but few houses and boats near to the ocean in the south of the map while on the West of map had farms and forest areas. There was a deck at the edge of the village for easy access for fishers.
This small village has turned into a commercialized village where tall buildings have constructed along the beach line. Since the deck has been removed, there were parasols in pace for entertainment. Meanwhile, the forest and farming areas removed for a golf course and the big roads have built to connect the villages located in West North of the map.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lages located in West North of the map.
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301675977654 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.150837988827 0.116061578633 130% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0782122905028 0.0759168565197 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0167597765363 0.0366838410393 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00558659217877 0.0131127313244 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162011173184 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.072625698324 0.0379272487307 191% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.39326515483 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167597765363 0.0210936926555 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139664804469 0.0948980150116 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111731843575 0.00967000014798 116% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 959.0 1161.00487805 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77710843373 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295180722892 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222891566265 0.247514529752 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.10843373494 0.171178102325 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0602409638554 0.112407865282 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39326515483 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 47.6137298955 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 20.75 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6096314127 42.9750493124 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 135.714022679 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 43.0391566265 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 3.09677419355 2.94281807926 105% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40570560485 0.418131533498 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117676362307 0.181151798455 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0365613523826 0.0850326197045 43% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.701478443872 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16685028469 0.157042692854 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216001149495 0.228904883108 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114916633592 0.108899403657 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409455198792 0.367819155151 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116660120237 0.0812612215331 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314410760435 0.316326947829 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710907015263 0.0921553760075 77% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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