The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth
The two adequately illustrated diagram indicates the biological rhythm of silkworm along with the complete phase that goes through the procedure of fabricating silk cloth.
Overall, the complete transformation of a newly hatched egg to an adult moth in major four stages is demonstrated in the first figure, while the second one portrays effective method comprising six steps in the production of properly refined silk cloth.
Primarily, in the surface of mulberry leaf moth lays a couple of hundred eggs which after ten days of interval transforms to silkworm larva. Fortunately, the leaf acts as the only food source that is consumed by the larva. Approximately during the period from one month to forty-two days larva forms silk thread all around its surface reaching several inches thick in diameter and up to two times longer in its length. However, within eight days silk thread fully takes place of the cocoon and the larva inside will fully mature into a moth after a fortnight. With this, the lifecycle repeats itself for eternity.
As a second part, the formed cocoon is collectively taken and kept in a vessel half-filled with water which then is boiled until the thread is ready to unwind till it reaches 300 to 900 meters in length. Further, the thread is twisted to form a strong thread of better quality which subsequently is taken to the vessel containing dye. Eventually, to provide proper shape and colouring, a thread is intertwined in a circular frame which is passed through the dye.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 187, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...dy to unwind till it reaches 300 to 900 meter in length. Further, the thread is twist...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 398, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...proper shape and colouring, a thread is weaved in a circular frame which is passed thr...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99212598425 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62215364755 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2729064471 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117041569004 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421108503718 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606733847004 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904899687039 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709671865683 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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