The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.

The diagrams compares house layout in two different types of climate.

It is clear from the diagrams that there are many differences between house design for cool and warm climate such as shapes of the houses, materials used and positions of features of the houses.

The first thing to notice is the shapes of the houses. Houses in cool climate have an one-sided roof dropping down from a high angle, whereas for houses in warm climate, they have two-sided roof which is built by reflective materials and overhang for shade. In cool climate, houses are built with thermal materials to store heat as well as to reduce heat loss. In warm climate, insulation are only installed on the top of the houses which helps to remove stored heat inside the house.

Houses in cool weather have only one window placed toward the direction of the sun so the houses could absorb more heat from the sun. On the other hand, houses in warm weather have two windows placed in two sides of the room. These windows are closed and covered during the day but opened in the evening to take advantage of ventilation, which removed stored heat.

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Average: 8.2 (66 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'compare'.
Suggestion: compare
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the houses. Houses in cool climate have an one-sided roof dropping down from a hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, whereas, as for, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72081218274 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21234790176 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0149153781 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24694393421 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100319365402 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819332695589 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163155076084 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701480740742 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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