The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals?

Essay topics: The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals?

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Humans are responsible for the environment related issues.As we are living in this and only we are resposible for this,So if we are the only reason then it's our responsibility to over come this problem.

Nowadays as we can see there are many factories are located which are emmiting the poisionous gas all the time apart from that now we are using bike,car,many vehicle from which environmental air get polluted.Also as we all know the population is increasing day by day so we are making more waste as well and disposal of the waste is not proper which leads our river and ocean polluted.

Now I think the government should take a strict action by passing a law for this ,So that we can use more public transport more as compare to our personal vehical.Government should take the extra tax from the people who are not helping the government.

Overall we can say environment is like our home So only we are responsible to make it clean and tidy.If we think in this way then may be we will get rid of this environment hazard.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: As
...ible for the environment related issues.As we are living in this and only we are r...
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Suggestion: , So
...this and only we are resposible for this,So if we are the only reason then its our ...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... this,So if we are the only reason then its our responsibility to over come this pr...
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Line 11, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , car
...me apart from that now we are using bike,car,many vehicle from which environmental a...
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Line 11, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vehicle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many vehicles'.
Suggestion: many vehicles
...art from that now we are using bike,car,many vehicle from which environmental air get pollut...
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Line 11, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Also
...om which environmental air get polluted.Also as we all know the population is increa...
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Line 11, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...om which environmental air get polluted.Also as we all know the population is increa...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... strict action by passing a law for this ,So that we can use more public transport...
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Line 13, column 129, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...t we can use more public transport more as compare to our personal vehical.Governm...
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Line 13, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Government
...more as compare to our personal vehical.Government should take the extra tax from the peop...
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Line 15, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: If
...e responsible to make it clean and tidy.If we think in this way then may be we wil...
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Line 15, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e responsible to make it clean and tidy.If we think in this way then may be we wil...
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Line 15, column 131, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...n and tidy.If we think in this way then may be we will get rid of this environment haz...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'apart from', 'i think']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.178571428571 0.268076937826 67% => OK
Verbs: 0.188775510204 0.116061578633 163% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102040816327 0.0759168565197 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0663265306122 0.0366838410393 181% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0969387755102 0.0131127313244 739% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117346938776 0.155750635184 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0459183673469 0.0379272487307 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85519019155 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015306122449 0.0210936926555 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102040816327 0.0948980150116 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0357142857143 0.00437022459523 817% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0204081632653 0.00967000014798 211% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1046.0 1161.00487805 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65405405405 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.248648648649 0.337110787985 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189189189189 0.247514529752 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135135135135 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.112407865282 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85519019155 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 52.3398941488 49.3433353143 106% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.25 23.0094962315 201% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2350309121 42.9750493124 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 261.5 135.714022679 193% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.25 23.0094962315 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.689975730869 290% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.48048780488 878% => OK
Readability: 65.1689189189 47.7609492067 136% => OK
Elegance: 0.971014492754 2.94281807926 33% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343531958182 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.207898785608 0.181151798455 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0703291118925 0.0850326197045 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.92296268638e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225110522206 0.228904883108 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412539259524 0.108899403657 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.236315957024 0.367819155151 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0846037760561 0.0812612215331 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225110522206 0.316326947829 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412539259524 0.0921553760075 45% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 2.0 7.1512195122 28% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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