The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it Is it the governments organisation or each individuals

Essay topics:

The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals?

Environmental problems are biggest issue in 21st century for whole world as many countries are in red and critical zone from global warming perspective. For any such issues everyone needs to come in front and match their feet to reduce the problems. We will discuss all views and conclude who should take responsibility for environmental issues.
Any major issue like Environment pollution can not happen in one day or year, its day by day activities which we do in our daily life. And major part comes from Individuals who should take responsibility to make our environment polluted. Smoking, using over packaged eating materials, using non recyclable items, using person vehicles are main causes of environmental pollution.
Government can also play vital role in controlling pollution by imposing new taxes in form of green tax and applying strict rules on emission of dangerous gases from industries and factories. Government can also can make public transport easier and accessible for their residents so they can avoid using personal vehicle to reduce air pollution. Green energy like solar panel and energy from water sources should be promoted to reduce pollution as well.
In conclusion we can easily say reducing pollution is not responsibility of only government, individuals or organizations but its cumulative responsibility of everyone and should come together to make our environment better to live and take fresh breath.

Votes
Average: 7.9 (17 votes)

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289256198347 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.157024793388 0.116061578633 135% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128099173554 0.0759168565197 169% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0330578512397 0.0366838410393 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0454545454545 0.0131127313244 347% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119834710744 0.155750635184 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0454545454545 0.0379272487307 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9912964758 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289256198347 0.0210936926555 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00413223140496 0.00175180941692 236% => OK
Determiners: 0.0165289256198 0.0948980150116 17% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0454545454545 0.00437022459523 1040% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123966942149 0.00967000014798 128% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1479.0 1161.00487805 127% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.9 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.5154185022 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73763899035 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361233480176 0.337110787985 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26872246696 0.247514529752 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233480176211 0.171178102325 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167400881057 0.112407865282 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9912964758 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.546246751206 114% => OK
Word variations: 64.4776619204 49.3433353143 131% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6471405228 42.9750493124 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.9 135.714022679 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 49.572246696 47.7609492067 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.9298245614 2.94281807926 66% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234713286638 0.418131533498 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0843811934857 0.181151798455 47% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0439001329205 0.0850326197045 52% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.585526899924 0.706616315825 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161690275242 0.157042692854 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101300912696 0.228904883108 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555282901388 0.108899403657 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.20579475581 0.367819155151 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0346643028923 0.0812612215331 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155032210662 0.316326947829 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425886401709 0.0921553760075 46% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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