A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter1 give contact details for when you are away2 give instructions about how to care for your pet3 describe other household duties.

Dear Jan,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to thank you, as you had accepted my request to take care of my house and dog during my vacation.
As, I had informed you my going for two weeks and will be back on May 12th, and there are few important things which I want to share with you, these information will help you during my absent. Firstly, I will be available on phone by 27X7, plus you can communicate with me over the whatsapp messenger any time I will have full internet access, moreover you can send me email also in case in fail to reply your phone call or text message. Secondly, It would be great if you take my pet dog outside in every evening, and also early morning approximately around 6:30 a.m. milkman will come to deliver milk, you can use it for making tea or coffee.
Even though, I will keep all the daily need items for you, however, if I missed something please buy anything what is need, I will return you the money once I am back.

Thank you again for helping me, you can call me any time to get any information in case I missed something.

Your Truly,
Satpreet Singh

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... things which I want to share with you, these information will help you during my absent. Firstly...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omething. Your Truly, Satpreet Singh
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30188679245 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20635752496 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63679245283 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6168289184 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188786271044 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957132452351 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262561547997 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107259224134 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234524396633 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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