The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Essay topics: The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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The given line graph provides data on average temperature, whereas the table chart gives information about the hours of sunshine in three different countries: London, New York and Sydney.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that the average temperature in both London and New York have a downward trend and that the mean temperature in Sydney fluctuates around the same time.

As the first graph illustrates, temperatures in London and New York have a similar pattern, although London have colder summers and hotter winters compared to New York. In January, temperatures are lower in New York than in London at about 8° and at around 5° respectively. In July, in both countries the temperatures hit the highest point at just under 30° in New York and at approximately 25° in London. On the other hand, in Sidney temperatures reach the lowest point in July at about 15°, while Sydney has the hottest weather in December and January.
As the second table suggests, the total number of hours of sunshine in New York are twice as high as those in London, with 2,535 and 1,180 correspondingly. Sydney has 2,473 hours of sunshine, making it the second country of the list in terms of solar hours.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89215686275 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70831447957 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2778797144 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164601948343 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079984762329 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649567774351 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126358243002 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601652021799 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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