The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The number of British commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030 is elucidated by the projected line graph.
Overall, the number of car travelers and train travelers increased and which are expected to continue with its usage, whereas the bus is experienced a declining trend. It is noticeable that, the car will be the main form of daily commuting transportation.
The number of passengers witnessed a substantial increase from about 5 million to 7 million for car users, whereas for the train passengers increased constantly from 2 million to 3 million between 1970 and 2000. This number of passengers remained unchanged for a decade till 2010. Meanwhile, the bus passengers decreased steadily from around 4 million passengers in 1970 to 3.2 million passengers by 2000.
From 2010 to 2030, the number of passengers using cars and trains increased remarkably to reach at 9 million and 4 million passengers, respectively. In contrast, there was a plummet in the number of British people used a bus as a daily commute to end at 3 million people by 2030.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['whereas', 'while', 'as for', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236180904523 0.268076937826 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.115577889447 0.116061578633 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0452261306533 0.0759168565197 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0251256281407 0.0366838410393 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0100502512563 0.0131127313244 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155778894472 0.155750635184 100% => OK
Participles: 0.035175879397 0.0379272487307 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95440945048 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402010050251 0.0210936926555 191% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0954773869347 0.0948980150116 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00502512562814 0.00437022459523 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00502512562814 0.00967000014798 52% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1084.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.9 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95604395604 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373626373626 0.337110787985 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291208791209 0.247514529752 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203296703297 0.171178102325 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.17032967033 0.112407865282 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95440945048 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 46.3012043893 49.3433353143 94% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.75 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6546440988 42.9750493124 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.8708791209 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.83333333333 2.94281807926 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404621359007 0.418131533498 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.176652877919 0.181151798455 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0830260669453 0.0850326197045 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.736160332877 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168058958599 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214094247285 0.228904883108 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15019911389 0.108899403657 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310878734177 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116161349178 0.0812612215331 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315989990741 0.316326947829 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162167373048 0.0921553760075 176% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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