The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph compares the amount of wheat exports over different areas in the period from 1885 to 1990.
Overall, it can be seen that there was a fluctuation in the number of wheat exported by all three areas. However, after the middle of 1988, European Community overtook others as the largest wheat export quantities.
Turning to details, in 1985, 15 million tons is exported on wheats by Australia, which is the lowest amount in all areas. Regarding Canada and European Community, the figure were a little similar, at about 17 million tons and 19 million tons, respectively.
Despite some fluctuations, the amount of wheat export by Canada continued to be higher than by others through three years. By 1986, it started to rise significantly and reached a peak at 25 million tons in 1988 while the figure for Australia and the other were only at over 12 million tons and 15 million tons respectively.
After that, there was a dramatic change that the total number of wheat exported by Canada rapidly decreased and drop to its lowest point in 1989, at under 15 million tons before increasing again. There was a similar trend when the figure for Australia continued to go down to around 11 million tons and remained at this point until 1990. In contrast, the one for European Community experienced went up gradually and reach the highest point, at over 20 million tons in 1990.

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Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82700421941 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54911692863 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2819771047 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143845404006 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766140890024 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622216813713 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110022048221 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651100305345 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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