The line graph demonstrates the weekly income of three different types of full-time graduate employees including higher degree, first degree and others qualification with various age groups in 2002.
The first key feature shows that first degree graduates had the lowest amount of income overall for the whole period, beginning with around $360 in 21-25 year olds per week and rising significantly to nearly $700 in 36-40 year olds. Then remained stable and experienced a slight fall to $690 at 56-60 age groups. The first degree graduates nevertheless remained the lowest in terms of weekly income. Similarly, the weekly earnings of higher degree graduates had reached to the high of around $750 then fell consistently but again rose more steeply to just under $800.
On the other hand, others qualification income followed a similar upward trend, increased significantly and reached a peak at just over $800 in 36-40 year olds, dipped to around $720 at 36-40 age groups, then dropped marginally to under $700 at 56-60 ages.
Overall, with the exception of others qualification, the amount of money that graduate employees made generally went up, with graduates of higher education in 56-60 year olds easily outnumbering other types of employees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...to under 00 at 56-60 ages. Overall, with the exception of others qualification, the amount of mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, similarly, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.205 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73933842378 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9818213979 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.714285714 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298482793765 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1463173406 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10712267099 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207015780443 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110169062122 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.