The graph shows the amount of fossil fuel energy generated in Europe between 1981 and 2001

Essay topics:

The graph shows the amount of fossil fuel energy generated in Europe between 1981 and 2001.

The line graph illustrates the figure for energy production by different sources in Europe over 20 years from 1981 to 2005.
In general, petroleum and natural gas witnessed an upward trend, while only coal had a downward trend. During this period, the amount of energy manufactured by petroleum accounted for the highest number of all types.
In 1981, 25 trillion units are spent on petroleum more than on natural gas and has no significant difference between the amount of coal and petroleum generated. 10 years later, coal steadily decreased from 30 to 20 trillion units and accounted for the same figure as natural gas, at 20 trillion units. Petroleum had a continual rise of 5 trillion units and remain stable in 1991, at about 40 trillion units.
Between 1991 and 2001, petroleum still increased significantly and hit a peak in 2001 from 40 to 50 trillion units. It can be seen that natural gas rise to 32 trillion units and overtook coal, more than 10 trillion units in the last period.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84795321637 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5960170264 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.9843682124 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.625 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122852537285 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640761785881 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680178170389 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910384308607 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521440134079 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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