The map shows the changes that had taken places in the countryside from 1930 to 2010 in Stokeford.
Overall, some changes would be seen in the accommodation and the farmland amenities, while public facilities showed to be the same.
When it came to the east area, retirement home was replaced with large house, while in that area primary school remained unchanged. However, in north-east area, many houses were built with extended the path,replacing from the farmland, and following this in the south-west was the same pattern, housings changing farmland.
Moreover, the developers were kept to maintain bridge in the north-west region and the trees around retirement house, while one big tree was cut down in front of that house. Also, they were established houses and expanded path in the middle of map around post office which still stayed in the former, while the shops were demolished to change a plethora of housings in that area.
- Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion 67
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 73
- the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010 summarise the information and make comparison where relevant 61
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts 73
- The illustrations show how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , replacing
...houses were built with extended the path,replacing from the farmland, and following this i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11612903226 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62727231811 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5262870828 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0625247630091 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442558810376 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723950689845 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641233850267 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811460211412 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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