Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
Nowadays we live in a global village, and we can contact any person lived in any part of the world in just a single click. Self-employment has been increasing at the rapid speed since last few years even though it has a few drawbacks. This essay will explain what the reasons for this fast change are and will also discuss the demerits of self-employments.
Every person wants to be the boss of his fate, and always has zeal to earn for himself by doing something independently. There are various reason for this type thinking. Firstly, in an organization, employees have to abide by the rules of the organization even though those rules may be liked by employees. For instance, in India, job holders must work minimum eight hours per day that can difficult for some person. Secondly, while work pressure could be another annoying reasons for staffs, the threatening for superior for not achieving targets makes the situation worse. However, a self-employed person makes his own rules, own objectives and own definition of work pressure. For instance, a doctor, a layers have their own financial need and hence work in a different ways; some works for 8 hours a day, while other works only 4 hours a day. Lastly, the efforts put by an employee to solve one task may be under monetary valuation, i.e. he is underpaid. Had he/she done similar effort on some individual work, he/she could have earn more remuneration. For example, the ethical hackers are paid as per their demand and ability. Had he been work in an organization, we would have drawn a limited salary, much lesser than his capability.
However, plethora of benefits are provided by companies to its employees to have cordial relationships in the organization, such as medical benefits, paid holidays and pension scheme. The earning of a self-employed person will be null if he/she fall sick. There would be no pension scheme for him after retirement, and must be depend on his own saving. But, in this today’s world, these issues can be well manageable if the self-employed person plans properly beforehand.
In conclusion, self-employment is increasing in today's modern society because self-employed can earn handsome amount on his own effort, and targets and pressure can be his own set. However, demerits like non availability of free medical benefits, pension scheme and paid holidays could be major setback of self-employment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 705, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a layer' or simply 'layers'?
Suggestion: a layer; layers
... work pressure. For instance, a doctor, a layers have their own financial need and hence...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 774, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...cial need and hence work in a different ways; some works for 8 hours a day, while ot...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1034, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...some individual work, he/she could have earn more remuneration. For example, the eth...
^^^^
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'falls'.
Suggestion: falls
...-employed person will be null if he/she fall sick. There would be no pension scheme ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 1.00243902439 1796% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 965.302439024 209% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 399.0 196.424390244 203% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06015037594 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9494391989 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 106.607317073 209% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558897243108 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 283.868780488 216% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0973239419 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.95 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335577573565 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104748870781 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668574382955 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212776041651 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658634741031 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 40.7170731707 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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