Quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002

Essay topics:

Quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002

The line graph illustrates the weight of commodities circulated in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different means of transportation.

Broadly speaking, all modes of transport experienced a net rise and the quantities of goods delivered via road were significantly greater than those through any other means.

In detail, starting off at 70 million tonnes in 1974, the figure for road fluctuated mildly to sometime after 1994 – before 1998 before soaring on the graph afterwards and peaking at nearly 100 million tonnes in 2002. While the starting point of the the figure for rail was only 2 million tonnes higher than that for water in 1974, the later experienced a continuous rise to 1990 before fluctuating afterwards with a peak at 60 million tonnes in 2002. The former, however, fluctuated throughout the entire time span and managed to peak at only a little more than 40 million tonnes, which was its initial statistical value in 1974.

The only exception to the alternate rise and fall above was the usage of pipeline for transportation of goods. The trendline for this mode of transport exhibited an upward trend from 1974 to sometime after 1994 before reaching a stable plateau at 21 million tonnes until 2002.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...es in 2002. While the starting point of the the figure for rail was only 2 million tonn...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...es in 2002. While the starting point of the the figure for rail was only 2 million tonn...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f pipeline for transportation of goods. The trendline for this mode of transport ex...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'broadly speaking']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227272727273 0.268076937826 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.0954545454545 0.116061578633 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636363636364 0.0759168565197 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0366838410393 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00454545454545 0.0131127313244 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.2 0.155750635184 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0454545454545 0.0379272487307 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73026643262 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272727272727 0.0210936926555 129% => OK
Particles: 0.00454545454545 0.00175180941692 259% => OK
Determiners: 0.122727272727 0.0948980150116 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00454545454545 0.00967000014798 47% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1232.0 1161.00487805 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.9 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98058252427 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344660194175 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242718446602 0.247514529752 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160194174757 0.171178102325 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126213592233 0.112407865282 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73026643262 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 55.9707345862 49.3433353143 113% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 29.4285714286 23.0094962315 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0958036381 42.9750493124 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.0 135.714022679 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 23.0094962315 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 53.7004160888 47.7609492067 112% => OK
Elegance: 3.15151515152 2.94281807926 107% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399009334637 0.418131533498 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.19483810458 0.181151798455 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124099454012 0.0850326197045 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.813227281555 0.706616315825 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128412326832 0.157042692854 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221719643641 0.228904883108 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644065985805 0.108899403657 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23595075642 0.367819155151 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.136208010983 0.0812612215331 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271409848529 0.316326947829 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479465514279 0.0921553760075 52% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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