Some people think that children’s free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time.
What is your opinion?
Lâm Bình Nguyên
B1808331
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the true importance and potential of education, and thus, it has become a significant part in the life of most people. Most of us think about education as a life-long process that we would continuously participate in throughout the course of our life, and therefore, we have a fairly relax and laid-back view toward education. However, some people believe that education is the utmost important duty not of them but of their children. And that has led to the belief that children must always be participate in educational activities, otherwise they will waste their time. Personally, I strongly disagree with this opinion for a few reasons.
First of all, I firmly believe that education is and will always be a life-long process. There is no point in forcing children into spending all or most of their time studying, doing so might increase their performance in school, but getting higher grades might only mean that they are good at memorizing and does not fully reflect their understanding of the subject matter. Furthermore, pressuring children into studying more for higher grades might do more harm than good since nobody likes being forced into doing things, children would be more likely to cheat in exams and tests. And lastly, I believe that no one has the right to rob children of their childhood, not even their parents. And I think we should let them live through their childhood to the fullest.
In short, I don’t think children should spend all of their time studying, because I believe that that would ended up doing more harm than good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'be' and 'participate'.
Suggestion: be always participate
...as led to the belief that children must always be participate in educational activities, otherwise th...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... their time studying, because I believe that that would ended up doing more harm than goo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld ended up doing more harm than good.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, i think, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97454545455 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59106155851 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3624351894 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.363636364 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274761173249 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115325746577 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104692017138 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191360691893 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577150791747 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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