The table represent the information about the underground railway system in six different cities with the detail review on the date opened, kilometer of route and passenger per year. It is clear that Tokyo opened in 1947 with 155 kilometer route has the maximum passenger per year about 1927 millions where as, newest opened railway of Los Angeles with the route of 28 kilometer has minimum passenger per year of 50 millions.
The data suggest that in city London the underground railway start at the early age of 1863 which is the oldest and has largest system with 394 kilometer route. It has the record of third highest passenger per year of 775 millions. Four cities Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto has the start up railway underground in between 1900-2000 AD in which the routes decreases gradually to Kyoto 11 km which is the smallest route with the lowest passenger of 5 millions per year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'represents'.
Suggestion: represents
The table represent the information about the underground r...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... passenger per year about 1927 millions where as, newest opened railway of Los Angeles w...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the newest'.
Suggestion: , the newest
...er per year about 1927 millions where as, newest opened railway of Los Angeles with the ...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...way of Los Angeles with the route of 28 kilometer has minimum passenger per year of 50 mi...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the largest'.
Suggestion: has the largest
...rly age of 1863 which is the oldest and has largest system with 394 kilometer route. It has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45287605077 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7419798877 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.6 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12592141383 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816427109723 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837560695535 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104624222051 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419747226286 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.