Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002)(my friends version)

The graph shows the goods transported in UK by four major ways such as pipeline, rail, water and road from 1974 to 2002. Over the period 1974 to 2002 as a whole, there was a gradual increase in the pipeline and water transport. The road and rail transport was at rapid change over the years.

Road remained the most popular transport at the beginning and till the end of the period, and the number reached to 100 millions tonnes in 2001. Water transport was slightly less than that of rail transport in 1974, after that, there was a sharp increase in the number of tonnes in 1982 and remain immutable till 1998, and then increased up to 65 million tonnes. It is also stood at the second most popular transport.

Rail has a consistency number from 1974 to 1978, then there was a downfall till 1982 and slightly soar in 1986. This is the transport of goods with rapid change through out the years. Pipeline was the lowest in 1974 and remain the least all over the years with constant increase in the trends.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ansport in 1974, after that, there was a sharp increase in the number of tonnes i...
^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...he transport of goods with rapid change through out the years. Pipeline was the lowest in 1...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51086956522 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21611216302 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9041575982 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161055550245 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810855425542 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539302751892 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123299812913 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519222731719 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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