The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The 2 maps above illustrate the traffic access into the city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

In general, by 2010, there is not much different about the surrounding road of the city hospital as well as the location of city hospital but there are some renovations and replacements to the surrounding facilities.

Specifically, two roundabouts are installed at the front of city hospital and at the crossroad between city road and hospital road for better flow of traffic. In term of surrounding facilities, by 2010, all bus stops are removed on the hospital road, instead of that people constructed a new bus station on the west side of hospital road with direct connections to 2 roundabouts. Moreover, the hospital staff and the public no longer share the same car park anymore. The old car park will be used by staff only, while, public car has to parked on the East side of city hospital.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...road, instead of that people constructed a new bus station on the west side of ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in general, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77466552285 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.233886581 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249169238431 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133819242546 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872426221405 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202328565151 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530862894692 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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