These two maps illustrate the changes on the road entering a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.There are three major new changes in the map of 2010, in order to imporove the transport around the city hospital.
Firstly, the road access to the hospital, termed hospital road, connects the hospital main entrance in one end and crosses the city road in the other end in 2007.In the new map of 2010, two roundabouts were constructed at the two ends.
Secondly, in 2007, there were six small bus stops along both sides of the hospital road, which were then all moved in a bus station to the west of hospital road in 2010.
Finally, the third change were about the car park. In the old map, there was only one parking place for both staff and public use, located to the east of the access road.However in the new map 2010, the old parking place was for staff only and a new one for public parking was built to the east of the hospital outside the ring road, which remained surrounding the hospital without any change.
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...tering a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.There are three major new changes in the map ...
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...he transport around the city hospital. Firstly, the road access to the hospital...
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... the city road in the other end in 2007.In the new map of 2010, two roundabouts we...
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...outs were constructed at the two ends. Secondly, in 2007, there were six small ...
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... to the west of hospital road in 2010. Finally, the third change were about the...
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... located to the east of the access road.However in the new map 2010, the old parking pl...
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... located to the east of the access road.However in the new map 2010, the old parking pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, then, third, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50810810811 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22959704765 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491891891892 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7472427039 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.8 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28705065802 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16077337869 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107113414448 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198974435223 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815068780852 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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