Writing task 1

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Writing task 1

The table compared the quantities of five different assortments of vehicles which were registered in all three different years in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

Overall, the numbers of five kinds of vehicles registered considerably increased over the period shown.In addition, the figure regarding passenger vehicles was the highest in all three years, but motocycles have the most dramatic growth.

In 2010, the greatest number was recorded for passenger vehicles with 11.8m while commercial ones was lower at only 2.3 milion .Over the following 4 years , passenger vehicles witnessed a significant rise of 10.2% to 13 million, whereas there were 0.4 million more commercial vehicles registered, an increase of 17,4%.

Turing to the remaining types of ones, there was a gradual growth of motocycles vehicles, which the registration grew from 540,000 in 2010 to 709,000 in 2014 that , a rise of 30,8%. During the same period , the number of heavy trucks and light trucks also saw a slightly climb, by 8.3% and 23.5% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...derably increased over the period shown.In addition, the figure regarding passenge...
^^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ercial ones was lower at only 2.3 milion .Over the following 4 years , passenger v...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Over
...cial ones was lower at only 2.3 milion .Over the following 4 years , passenger vehic...
^^^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y 2.3 milion .Over the following 4 years , passenger vehicles witnessed a signific...
^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... 540,000 in 2010 to 709,000 in 2014 that , a rise of 30,8%. During the same period...
^^
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a rise of 30,8%. During the same period , the number of heavy trucks and light tr...
^^
Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('climb') instead of another adjective.
... heavy trucks and light trucks also saw a slightly climb, by 8.3% and 23.5% respectively.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31515151515 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78799636887 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6585328371 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.4 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.23603664747 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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