You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen, but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter•Describe the problem with the equipment •Explain what happened when you pho

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain regarding a 4-burner gas stove that I bought day before yesterday from your store.

To begin with the issues that I am facing, the three out of four burners of the stove are not functioning. Moreover, the one which is working does not produce the flame at its optimum.

Being unhappy about the purchase, I decided to call at your shop. I explained the situation to one of the sales person and his name was Suraj. Unfortunately, he provided me with no solution and also was rude in his tone.

I am extremely dissatisfied with the assistance of your customer service support team as well as with the product. I would like you to either replace the appliance provided it should be of the same model and from the same company brand. Or if that cannot be possible, then I want a refund of the entire amount.

I am eagerly waiting for your immediate action towards this. Please resolve this as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully
Nupur

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain regarding a 4-b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ase resolve this as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Nupur
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... soon as possible. Yours faithfully Nupur
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... possible. Yours faithfully Nupur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67613636364 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54280884218 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670454545455 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8980177358 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5833333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188039639098 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058769288822 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379086509698 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840076670812 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030991127722 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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