you like volleyball Yes I do I really like playing volleyball because it is a active sport It helps me to improve my high I have started playing volleyball since I was 10 I usually play volleyball after many hours hard studying and spend from two to three

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
you like volleyball? Yes I do. I really li...
^^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y like playing volleyball because it is a active sport. It helps me to improve my...
^
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...dying and spend from two to three hours so as to practice it at my school yard. Maybe us...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...Maybe usual playing volleyball can me. you like volleyball? Yes I do. I really li...
^^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y like playing volleyball because it is a active sport. It helps me to improve my...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...dying and spend from two to three hours so as to practice it at my school yard. Maybe us...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...Maybe usual playing volleyball can me. you like volleyball? Yes I do. I really li...
^^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y like playing volleyball because it is a active sport. It helps me to improve my...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...dying and spend from two to three hours so as to practice it at my school yard. Maybe us...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...Maybe usual playing volleyball can me. you like volleyball? Yes I do. I really li...
^^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y like playing volleyball because it is a active sport. It helps me to improve my...
^
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...dying and spend from two to three hours so as to practice it at my school yard. Maybe us...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 5.60731707317 927% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46875 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56002166739 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 48.0 106.607317073 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.1875 0.547539520022 34% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 1.53170731707 1306% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 8.94146341463 313% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 9.0 22.4926829268 40% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0592465534 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 40.8571428571 112.824112599 36% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.14285714286 22.9334400587 40% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 3.70975609756 755% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.905212827588 0.215688989381 420% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.373422951369 0.103423049105 361% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139941253556 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.644370672984 0.15604864568 413% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218687224654 0.0819641961636 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 13.2329268293 32% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 61.2550243902 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.87 11.4140731707 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 0.94 8.06136585366 12% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 8.0 40.7170731707 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.5 11.4329268293 22% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.9970731707 51% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 3.0 11.0658536585 27% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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