The diagram below gives information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shown depicts the manufacturing process of a meat pie and a sample of meat pie with ingredients.
The process starts with two separate assembly lines, one for processing potato and the other for meat. The potatoes are delivered to the store, from where they are first cleaned. From delivery to cleaning it takes up to 2 months. Cleaned potatoes are then peeled and sliced before boiling. The potato peels get disposed off in a waste disposal chamber separately. Boiled potatoes are chilled and then stored for further use in the meat pie production line. For the meat, refrigerated beef is delivered for defrosting first and it takes up to 2 weeks before it is put for further processing. Defrosted beef is sprinkled with salt and pepper before heating it in oven. The fat is then removed from the beef and its smaller pieces are made. The waste is disposed off to a waste disposal chamber at this step. The diced beef is inspected for quality before putting in containers. Peas and carrots along with prepared gravy is added on top of the meat. The final ingredient is potato which is taken from the storage and added as the topmost layer of the meat pie. It is then wrapped and frozen before dispatching to markets. A finished meat pie contains a potato layer on the top and meat layer at the bottom. Between these two layers there is peas and carrot layer along-with gravy sauce.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'meat'.
Suggestion: meat
...wn depicts the manufacturing process of a meat pie and a sample of meat pie with ingre...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ocessing potato and the other for meat. The potatoes are delivered to the store, fr...
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Line 3, column 808, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a waste disposal chamber at this step. The diced beef is inspected for quality bef...
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Line 3, column 1123, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'finished meat'.
Suggestion: Finished meat
... frozen before dispatching to markets. A finished meat pie contains a potato layer on the top ...
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Line 3, column 1233, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are peas'?
Suggestion: there are peas
...at the bottom. Between these two layers there is peas and carrot layer along-with gravy sauce...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255639097744 0.220444632235 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.199248120301 0.167888034529 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0606518309736 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0300751879699 0.0506257000042 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0263157894737 0.118615021944 22% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.135338345865 0.107062808482 126% => OK
Participles: 0.105263157895 0.041066498444 256% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.4500428623 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225563909774 0.0385302599488 59% => OK
Particles: 0.00375939849624 0.00132118243153 285% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.0714148451538 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0191574576366 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00751879699248 0.00930345855455 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1400.0 1141.60824742 123% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.134020619 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69105691057 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321138211382 0.284621296913 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227642276423 0.211203875043 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138211382114 0.133321485273 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0691056910569 0.0843313296314 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4500428623 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.622163163488 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.424449079 62.8969750728 74% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4705882353 16.4300151701 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.9044621981 44.7399317507 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3529411765 90.9928171075 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 16.4300151701 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.117647058824 0.613754768223 19% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 37.2348158776 37.5504026743 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.94117647059 1.13073093955 172% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324442858785 0.331212695627 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105448119004 0.0927372745006 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0809829101636 0.0736520305886 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.437983056218 0.579516596996 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180305674767 0.180689518051 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139396897641 0.122183219658 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872331408338 0.0765303033291 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34306835136 0.211926503985 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737400523855 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281622821319 0.203819188451 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224400108075 0.067151250289 33% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.45360824742 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.0206185567 323% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 4.73195876289 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 8.32989690722 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.