Essay topics: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a familyfor six months and look after their six- year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- give details

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...posted by you in an Australian magazine.I am interested for this job. I am a suit...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... magazine.I am interested for this job. I am a suitable person for this job becau...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... First I have experience of teaching. so one teacher know very well how to deal ...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ow very well how to deal with children. also I can help your child in his school hom...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...ow very well how to deal with children. also I can help your child in his school hom...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...elp your child in his school home work. instead of that I am very good in cooking. I ca...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ry. I am also state champion in swimming . so I can teach your child how to swim. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... I am also state champion in swimming . so I can teach your child how to swim. ...
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Suggestion: So
... to walk in garden during my free time. so I can take your child on walk with me ....
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...so I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I al...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I also lo...
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Line 11, column 94, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I also lo...
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Line 11, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e time. I can teach our child painting. I also like to learn new lanuages during ...
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Line 11, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...learn new lanuages during my free time. I can help your child in learning languag...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
... help your child in learning languages. instead of all above I also visit beach during ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve I also visit beach during holiday. I think all above make me perfect person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26767676768 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13691362446 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4171839706 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.9444444444 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185021348208 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553006382683 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532670519548 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119561793893 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380747734319 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.3 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.86 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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