A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
– explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
– tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
– say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear Jot,
How are you? How’s your preparation going on? I am writing this basically to tell that you that, I will not be able to pick you from the railway station.
I am extremely sorry to say that I will not be available at the time your train will be coming because I will be away from the city and will most likely come in the evening. However, I have arranged everything for you, when you reached the station call on 465456355, this is Jane my best friend's number, he will drop you and hand-over the keys of the apartment to you.
I would be coming in the evening around 6 o’clock till than just have some fruits which are placed in the fridge and if you want to order something just Jane knows about it, he will order for you.
In the evening, we will visit the historical art museum of Toronto, the biggest rose garden, and then will have dinner at a Punjabi restaurant as I know you love to have Punjabi food. After having dinner, we will go to the club to enjoy the nightlife of the city.
I cannot wait to see you. I hope you do not mind of the plan. Please write me back as soon as possible.
Yours Truly,
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21198156682 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16151139152 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7286553617 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395117305473 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137690307808 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703909477926 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214233808538 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879019767732 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21198156682 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16151139152 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7286553617 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395117305473 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137690307808 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703909477926 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214233808538 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879019767732 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.