A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country city Write a letter to him her In your letter write what he or she can do in your country city advise him about the place he could stay at suggest him her what to p

Essay topics:

A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:
what he or she can do in your country/city
advise him about the place he could stay at
suggest him/her what to pack and bring while coming to travel to your country/city

Dear Jane,

Hope you are doing good. I received your letter this morning and I was thrilled after reading your postcard that you are travelling to my city.

I am curious to know that is your trip associated with business or vacation. Alongside, let me know about your itinerary as well. Furthermore, it would be great if you could let me know for how many days are you planning to be in the city, so that I can schedule my office accordingly.

I know you are always fascinated by the art work, coincidentally, in the city we have an upcoming exhibition on local art and craft, as well as regional cuisines. I am sure you will love it. Also, all thanks to the season, the local administrative bodies have opened, the garden of flowers for tourists. It is a beautiful escape to the nature, moreover, the flower beds are maintained artistically. The place is great for clicking fantastic photographs.

Last but not the least, I suggest on the way to my residence, do halt at the Ancient 62 fine-dine restaurant. The place serves mouth-watering Thai food with authentic flavors, you will love the meal and the hospitality.

Looking forward to see you.

Your Friend,
Alex

Votes
Average: 6.2 (9 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
...ce, do halt at the Ancient 62 fine-dine restaurant. The place serves mouth-watering Thai f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...and the hospitality. Looking forward to see you. Your Friend, Alex
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, incidentally, look, moreover, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8744251682 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7698880604 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2857142857 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 4.34317383033 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171810670953 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596876311374 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602991249505 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846892989331 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706016551644 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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