To the tourism office,
My name is Jim and I saw an advertisement of recruiting courier for showing tourists around the city on weekends. I am interested in the job; therefore, I am writing to you to apply for the post. The reason why I apply for the job is because I am a full-time student in university, I want to earn money for my tuition on spare time. I think this job perfectly suit me.
I am born in the city and live here since. Thus, I know every corner of the city and I believe I am qualified for the job. I have visited all famous sites in the city and I am familiar with every shopping center, hotel and transportation intersection. In addition, I know exactly whe most popular dish in every restaurant.
Moreover, I have a car. I have been driving in last three years. I believe the capbility to drive is a essential requirment for couriers. I think I am a qualified candidate for the job. Please consider me for the post. I am looking forward to your reply and work in the post.
Yours faithfully,
Jim Pan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ost. The reason why I apply for the job is because I am a full-time student in university,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rs. I believe the capbility to drive is a essential requirment for couriers. I th...
^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is a essential requirment for couriers. I think I am a qualified candidate for th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38341968912 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75604811815 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544041450777 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 38.1059342127 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244963684811 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806779475595 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566297325717 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152953514807 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663027220854 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.