In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
Nowadays, children and teenagers are in the news of committing more crimes across the globe. The statistics keep on increasing in the past years. In this essay, I intend to discuss many reasons that provoke the young minds to do something harmful and find some preventive and precautionary actions to reduce it.
Young minds are vulnerable and have immense reasons to do such activities. Sometimes, they are influenced by TV programs and films that show such vulgar things. Suppose a tennager or school kid killed people near the mall. News channels telecast such things multiple times to give lessons to other people but young minds take it as a positive thing such as they become famous and get popularity because of their immaturity. At present, people live in a nuclear family. So, parents go to offices and they do not have time for their children. As a result, they fall into bad company and may take drugs and get into the habit of smoking and over-drinking. To manage these activities, they will start doing petty crimes. This eventually leads to their world of crime.
Furthermore, Increasing Unemployment and Poverty make them criminals. They see the people having lavish lives. So, They also want that kind of life by hook or crook. Hence, they deep down into the journey of crime to meet their basic necessities.Consumerism approach also takes teenagers to dive into the well of crime. Since, they want to try new things which their parents can not afford. So, they start doing crimes like snatching , picking pockets and so on.
Young minds should be punished because they should know what wrong they have done. But it is not the only way to reduce crime. There are many precautions that can be taken to reduce the crime by teenager rate. We should improve the employment rate so that they can meet their basic needs. Censorship of TV should be applied so that relevant and positive acts can be watched. Teenagers should watch less hours of TV so that they can spend more time with books, sports and life leading exercise. Parents should watch TV with their children so as to see their taste, likes and dislikes. They should live in a joint family with their grandparents.Hence, their grandparents should take care when their parents go to offices. They can check their grandchildren day-to-day activities and check their friends' activities also.
Consequently, it is not the onus of young minds to live with maturity and not to lead life towards crime. However, the parents and their responsible guardians help them lead better lives with limited resources and unlimited hard work to achieve greater heights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as to, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 5.05154639175 455% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 26.3917525773 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 937.175257732 234% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 443.0 206.0 215% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95033860045 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67219550267 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 127.690721649 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525959367946 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 290.88556701 222% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 12.6804123711 229% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3424551251 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6206896552 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.275862069 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75862068966 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 1.49484536082 803% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167360399751 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521617834854 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078417754757 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978838462538 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740077423572 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 41.2886597938 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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