ou recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the manag

Essay topics:

ou recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

Say where you think you left the papers.

Explain why they are so important

Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in connection with the meeting I attended which organized by company at your hotel on Oct 1st, 2019. I had left some confidential papers at your hotel and need your assistance to secure them till I come and collect personally.

Let me explain the situation in more detail. I found that some document was missing once I reached home. This is the desk number 'EC' assigned to me for this meeting and the document should available inside the drawer. These are highly secured document, it has information about our contract with clients on upcoming projects for the next financial year. Additionally, at any moment this should not leaked to our competitors. My organization is your hospitality partner for last 6 years and many important meetings have been held in your hotel and our relationship will continue for coming years. I hope you have understood the seriousness of this document. So, please go to the meeting hall and get the document from the desk immediately and keep in a secured place. I will visit your hotel to collect the papers personally. Thank you for the support.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,

Sreenivas

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'leak'
Suggestion: leak
...tionally, at any moment this should not leaked to our competitors. My organization is ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93034825871 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70332895262 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4074524136 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2307692308 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23412864783 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788867556211 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598360974046 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165291937827 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238300659558 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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