People in your area are having problems wit their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter . Describe the problems , Explain how they are affecting people, say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir,
Good day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, 23 years old. I live at Cogeo, Antipolo City. I wrote this letter because I have an internet Service provided by Globe, your company. Right now, people in our area having problems with our internet connection.
As a result, my family and I cannot watched online movies, download files and search informations for school and work purposes, like we used to. In addition, we used internet to connect to our family away from home and that is our only way to keep in touch to our loved ones. Now, we can not do all of those things due to this inconvenience. Your company knows that with these issues you need to give us credits for the days that we are unable to use our internet service. Also, I dont want to change provider, so I recommend that your company should resolve this issue as soon as possible.
Hopefully, this concern will be fixed right away. Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Maria Judith Parayno
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rs old. I live at Cogeo, Antipolo City. I wrote this letter because I have an int...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...le to use our internet service. Also, I dont want to change provider, so I recommend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68965517241 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44070926147 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706896551724 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9686483671 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187331651005 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625976244708 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761601903186 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125112025687 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793962008261 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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